A look at Life's Through The Eyes of a Brothel Bastard
What a beautiful and poignant piece of writing. The novel will be welcomed in literary circles as well as generally. Thank you.
Thank you so much...I trust your comment will happen someday
This piece is so enthralling. I look forward to reading the full work . Welldone.
Wonderful, poignant and fulfilling read.
Thanks
Thanks all...I'm grateful for the feedback
I read through the whole thing.
The storyline is deffinately one that many will be able to connect to. Especially with everything being exposed.
A Nubian Beauty arose in Edo State
A woman of such glory that all must have
The Silent lover never made a sound
Until he came, stealing her heart
Bringing cries of ecstasy from her lips
Until, against all reason she fell in love
And became with child.
Then in his eyes, the Forze Speciale
had dimmed to the norm
and with a child, he left her
all alone, until at last
she gave her last breath,
Delivering a single perfect nymph
in her place.
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This is a great start to a promising story, one that I hope you continue to work on.
At first, I confused Edo state with Edo Province and thought this was taking place in Japan
And the references to Italy only added to it, until I looked up Edo State
I was tempted to make reference to a water spirit, and did.
Thank you so very much for letting us read this.
What a beautiful and poignant piece of writing. The novel will be welcomed in literary circles as well as generally. Thank you.
Thank you so much...I trust your comment will happen someday
This piece is so enthralling. I look forward to reading the full work . Welldone.
Wonderful, poignant and fulfilling read.
Thanks
Thanks all...I'm grateful for the feedback
I read through the whole thing.
The storyline is deffinately one that many will be able to connect to. Especially with everything being exposed.
A Nubian Beauty arose in Edo State
A woman of such glory that all must have
The Silent lover never made a sound
Until he came, stealing her heart
Bringing cries of ecstasy from her lips
Until, against all reason she fell in love
And became with child.
Then in his eyes, the Forze Speciale
had dimmed to the norm
and with a child, he left her
all alone, until at last
she gave her last breath,
Delivering a single perfect nymph
in her place.
----------------------------------
This is a great start to a promising story, one that I hope you continue to work on.
At first, I confused Edo state with Edo Province and thought this was taking place in Japan
And the references to Italy only added to it, until I looked up Edo State
I was tempted to make reference to a water spirit, and did.
Thank you so very much for letting us read this.